Innocence-Lost Poem by Vidi Writes


Rating: 4.9

It’s my all time favorite repose-compartment
Open the pages to see my ingenuous chapters
Wonder why I have lost my innocence supplement
Once, that stance was part and parcel of all my matters!
Excavation can help me, I take this dig.

Cradle to grade one, infancy free verse at recite
From there a saga of tutoring, a phase of delight
Forever forgiven, naive menaces, a period of elite
It’s time then society norms dictate man’s plight.
Exclusive shots of this dig.

Its now, the virtue lost from face and it’s struck at throat
Costless thrillers, pastime, under the vigilant scanners
Salt water couldn’t heal the pain, but it did pivot
As a proof of living, had to hold pre-printed banners.
Extensive damage, reports my dig.

Discolored utterances played havoc, gullet to blame
Etiquette pushed into belly to help in digestion claim
Fed with indigestible cereals, system hanged in shame
The so called Innocence departed under the foot into the drain.
Exhibit of my dig –‘Innocence Lost’.


Catrina Heart 20 April 2009

Excellent master piece, i have to reread it to take the message well...Unique theme i have read for today....great write, ...10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 April 2009

Costless thrillers, pastime, under the vigilant scanners Salt water couldn’t heal the pain, but it did pivot.....................quite ingenious write,10+, thanks for sharing, Vidi...

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 April 2009

Good one 10.............

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Vaibhav Pandey 19 April 2009

an outstanding poetic creation ma'm.....I simply loved it...10

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An extremely inveterating write, Vidi...Lifes stages tempt, take, display, restore & in Death...usually embrace innocence...Your philosophical spin on ''Innocence in the life of.....''', was quite capturing...and as always, young lady... a job very well done! FjR '09

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 May 2009

A poem with great depth ma'am arouses the reader's mind's eye.....very meaningful and makes the reader think about the state the world has crumbled itself into....... and thanks for your kind visit to my poems, regards, shan

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2009

Innocence lost...yes; you make a good dig there to come out with a meaningful inference...thanks...10

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rago rago 28 April 2009

A good write madam.........the last lines clearly depicts the fact. Yet we can retrieve.......splendid write. For this kind stuff I never give marks because these poems beyond the man made marks....quantity. my heartful of thanks for your kind sharing.

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Subroto Chatterjee 26 April 2009

Deep stuff here. And we lose our innocence for many reasons..You had some interesting ones.. Cheers. Subroto

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 April 2009


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