Chuck Audette

Rookie - 59 Points (Poetry Hell, Vermont)

Concrete Poem #1: 'soup' (A Tribute To Reinhard Döhl) - Poem by Chuck Audette

soupsoupsoup fly soupsoupsoupsoup
   soupsoupsoupsoupsoupsoupso up

      Waiter! there's a fly in my poem

(in the style of Reinhard Döhl's 'Apple'.
Note, final appearance may be due to browser differences - should look like a bowl of soup)

Comments about Concrete Poem #1: 'soup' (A Tribute To Reinhard Döhl) by Chuck Audette

  • (5/9/2006 1:50:00 PM)

    Hi Chuck...cute Chuckle...You were right about my concrete poem difficulties...tried to put one on the website and the letters kept fritzin on I gave up! ! Grumble, mutter, grumble...
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  • (4/27/2006 1:28:00 PM)

    OK you got me laughing out loud again! I love your work! :) Justine. (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2006 4:35:00 AM)

    funny stuff Mr A.
    Anna xxx
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  • (4/17/2006 10:25:00 AM)

    A great giggle of a gag, Chuckles! The soup bowl looks parfait, by the way. I can't top Ernestine's funny lines, alas - still waking up! Maybe you can do a twist on a fairy tale sometime, like Goldilocks and poor little bear's constant disappointments? ! Just a thought. Est : ] (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2006 1:28:00 PM)

    Love this Charles funny, clever and pleasing on the eye.
    best wishes Vincent
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  • Ernestine Northover (4/14/2006 1:19:00 PM)

    Ooopps! where's the fly swatter. Just tell it to buzz off. A souper write here, I hold great stock by this one. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 3, 2007

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