Concrete Poem #1: 'soup' (A Tribute To Reinhard Döhl) Poem by Chuck Audette
Concrete Poem #1: 'soup' (A Tribute To Reinhard Döhl)
soupsoupsoup fly soupsoupsoupsoup
soupsoupsoupsoupsoupsoupsoup
soupsoupsoupsoupsoupsoup
soupsoupsoupsoupsoup
Waiter! there's a fly in my poem
(in the style of Reinhard Döhl's 'Apple'.
Note, final appearance may be due to browser differences - should look like a bowl of soup)
Hi Chuck...cute Chuckle...You were right about my concrete poem difficulties...tried to put one on the website and the letters kept fritzin on me...so I gave up! ! Grumble, mutter, grumble... Hugs, Dee
A great giggle of a gag, Chuckles! The soup bowl looks parfait, by the way. I can't top Ernestine's funny lines, alas - still waking up! Maybe you can do a twist on a fairy tale sometime, like Goldilocks and poor little bear's constant disappointments? ! Just a thought. Est : ]
Love this Charles funny, clever and pleasing on the eye. best wishes Vincent
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4/26/2024 12:25:34 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Ooopps! where's the fly swatter. Just tell it to buzz off. A souper write here, I hold great stock by this one. Love Ernestine XXX