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A Fleeting Thought

Rating: 4.9
I watched the days
and time
fly by

Sparrows -
their songs too brief
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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2019
Well conceived and nicely encapsulated with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Chuck.
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Iris Blue 28 November 2013
A fleeting thought, perhaps, but the one that most definitely lingers....less is more and every single word here counts. Lovely Chuck...
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Smoky Hoss 22 September 2012
Days move in ages, and time in moments; sparrows live many days, but a song is gone in a moment of wonder. BEAUTIFUL poem Chuck.
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Walterrean Salley 09 August 2012
This little gem is brief, but rich and enduring.
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Gone Away 07 March 2010
Your touch is as light as a feather here...well done.
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Ruth Walters 14 September 2009
Aren't we all just little sparrows and now with technology so cheap, we all, on 'Twitter' tweet, tweet, tweet..... but for this little sparrow, please, write more poems such as these; -) Ruthy (alias 'Little Sparrow' come read mine...please) : -) (oh gosh, I do hope you've heard of 'Twitter' it's this new internet site you see, where people write down their thoughts...otherwise you might think I'm completely out of my tree, heh heh)
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Sandra Fowler 29 May 2009
Wonderful use of metaphor. The loveliness of your fleeting thought lingers in the mind. Warm regards, Sandra
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this haiku looking seemingly innocous devouring depth of thought good work Chuck
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Original Unknown Girl 10 February 2009
I've always found sparrows to be rather insignificant little things, your poem brings them to life though. HG: -) xx
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Dorothy- A. Holmes 17 April 2008
Very nice my dear...at what age did you first notice this? (smile) Dorothy
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