Confession Poem by Patricia Gale

Confession

Rating: 5.0
 


Confessing my dreams to a golden moon
embraced by his light….

My own choices
No judgmental voices

Golden globe holds my soul....
suddenly star struck

Twinkling yellow..
then white to blue

Dancing in your arms
Swaying me to heaven

Sapphire blue mirrors
pulling me nearer

Caressing my mind
arousing all senses....

My own choices....
No judgmental voices

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard Snyder 02 February 2017

Well deserved. Should be 'poem of the year! Congrats Patricia!

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Charles M Moore 23 September 2008

Beautiful imagery of thoughts confession.

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Laura Green 12 September 2008

this poem certainly has a lovely flow to it. Really like the imagery

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I absolutely love that meaning-packed repeated stanza. t x

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Kris Smith 08 September 2008

Wonderful write the poem draws you in and takes you along floating on an ebb tide being drawn to the moon warm and moving piece 10 Chris x

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