Correct Or Incorrect? Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Correct Or Incorrect?

Rating: 4.3


Correct or incorrect?

to fill the void
on this tabloid,
must be cleaned up first
until the last gasp
even if it's your last hiccup,
friends and foes?
Get rid of it!
the survival of the fittest is constantly a loner!
not one with muscles,
just one with a full ratio and art speech

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A Ten Liners Poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

"Must be cleaned up first…" pertinent. Lovely poem. Brevity adds to its beauty.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 March 2023

Thank you for your great appreciations, Unnikrishnan poet!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 March 2023

Thank you so much for your great support, Unnikrishnan!

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Richard Wlodarski 07 March 2023

A poem of brilliance!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 March 2023

Very much true. Very much eloquent you are there, Silvie

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Within just three days of publishing, this poem is listed the Best Member Poems. Remarkable achievement. Congratulations, Sylvia. I hope it will soon be ranked among the top in the coming days. All the best

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 March 2023

THis poem is 5 STRAS worth, but I myself clicked PAR ACCIDENT on only ONE Star, that stupidity

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M. Asim Nehal 03 March 2023

Terse, Very true. I liked it.5***

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 March 2023

Thank you, much gratitude!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 March 2023

Thank you Dr. M. Asim Nehal, especially for the FIVE STARS, my great thank you!

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