eyes,
that grope for a meaning,
to seek the universe in itself,
womb,
possessing all the gods.
aura,
of a temple-shrine.
rhythm,
of motherly love.
seen eating polythene bags,
in the corridors of adversity.
very nice...both the symbol used and the truth behind...creative work Sarvesh...10
a very significant statement given in a wonderful manner.thanks10
woo...I personally used to think that the cows meditate But I don't know the truth I wonder why they look meditative....
I do like this poem but the last two lines especially. seen eating polythene bags, in the corridors of adversity. With such a wild imagination you seem to have an extra facility than most people. I think any corridor would become the corridor of adversity if you ate polythene bags there. This poem makes me smile.10/10.
always thought cows have beautifull black, colarium eyes, always sad though! the poem is short and sweet, with strong message.great job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sarvesh...what do you want me to comment on such a gentle yet firm message...