Crab Nebula Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Crab Nebula

Rating: 4.9


Today is the day
When you came into being
For earthly sight seeing
From motherly heaven
To this terrestrial
Vertigo of seven
You travelled 5000 light years
Muizza, my dear of all dears
In this constellation of stars
You are the one all at pars!

(Dedicated to my niece Muizza Abbas on her 24th. Birthday on 14th. May,2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 14 May 2009

beautiful poem written.............Happy birthday to her too.

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Mamta Agarwal 14 May 2009

your niece sure must be a great joy to inspire you to write this lovely poem in celebration of her birtyday. Mamta

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Joseph Poewhit 14 May 2009

Some people are GOD sent into our lives

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Marieta Maglas 21 May 2009

a really beautiful poem 10++

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DiAnne Douglass 19 May 2009

Beautifully written, I loved it. Keep up the good work and please continue to write beautiful poetry.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 31 May 2009

What a birthday gift, a dedication of Love and pride, and already placed tenderly into her treasure chest I am sure - a legacy you have already left to the world Naseer - this is left in her heart for all time Peace to you all

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Naidz Ladia 24 May 2009

belated happy birthday to your niece..nebula, a star...stars that brighten the night as inspiration to lonely sky..this piece is a nice gift to your loving niece..naizz

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Another excellent work, love with 10.

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Duh Huh 22 May 2009

You immortalized the love you feel for your niece in this beautiful poem. Am sure she was impressed, honored and greatful as this is such a wonderful gift. Thank you very much for sharing. :)

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Saadat Tahir 22 May 2009

hi naseer phenomenal...you wrote a celestial ode...took a light speed tour of the universe and found a jewel...no mean task there great penning cheers...its a tenner

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