Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 26,888 Points (17.03.1965)

Creation - Poem by Lyn Paul

What I have created is so Beautiful
What more could I ask
What more is there in this world
Other than...
Creation of Life
It is
A continuous cycle
Skip the greed
And the Creation will remain Beautiful
Support the greed
And our Creation...
Will
No Longer Be



Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Topic(s) of this poem: Greed


Comments about Creation by Lyn Paul

  • Tom Allport (5/8/2017 4:01:00 PM)


    an insightful poem of one of creations possible downfalls? ...........well written (Report) Reply

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  • Adeline Foster (12/6/2013 4:09:00 PM)


    Nicely done. Read mine - Who Am I -
    Adeline
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  • Amitava Sur (10/20/2013 6:27:00 PM)


    well thought write up. Life can't move without creation. (Report) Reply

  • (10/12/2013 9:27:00 AM)


    A great poem, if we could skip the greed, what a world
    it would be.
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  • David Wood (10/12/2013 5:24:00 AM)


    The cycles of life is beauty to behold. Lovely poem Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • (10/12/2013 3:22:00 AM)


    The cycles of life are precious and their continuity should be respected. Great thoughts. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 4, 2014


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