Crimson Tears Poem by Sathya Narayana
Crimson Tears
Who killed whom?
How many died
our men; their men?
Crushed flesh and bones
knew no difference.
Spilled crimson tears
mourned sans bias.
Remnant pathos
filled the ambience
with quiet noise
and shrilling silence.
OH! Brothers versus brothers
in senseless violence
look at thoses spirits
of lost lives precious
fighting aimless battles
now in repentence.
Look at these scared beings
waiting in patience
for eternal peace.
Not by guns
not by malevalence
Use love and kindness
know God's oneness
YOU CAN ERASE BOUNDARIES
and earn boundless happiness.
Excellent anti-war poem Sathya, great message. Best wishes, Andrew
What an honest appeal in this emotive verse Sathya - - and would do well to be echoed worldwide...... top marks for this..... from Fay.
that was very true- after the voilence the repentment because they come to their senses- agood capture of the situation=10
Not by guns Not by malevalence Use love and kindness Know God’s oneness YOU CAN ERASE BOUNDARIES And earn boundless happiness --- Fabulous stanza.......a poem written with zeal, a way to peace, of brotherhood to all of us.....10++++++++++++
Nice and perceptive poem, Sathya. Reflects the necessity of mutual understanding and respect in today's malice torn world.
Concise, terse, and filled with haunting imagery. You grab the reader's attention for sure. Well done. Just one point: should it not be noise verses noice? -John
Sathya, this an excellent plea for peace and a recognition we are one. 10/10 Bob
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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ahh! ! Too hard hitting! loved it! I havent been around for long now.. I know :) pleasure to read you though