! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *curve Of Mystery*! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *curve Of Mystery*! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
CURVE OF MYSTERY
Day and night flow by the nature
seasons follow one after another
snow falls dazzling by brightness
do they have any quest and query.?
rain and thunder, may restrain the light
as black shadow curtains glaze and glow
all when freaks of wonder by mysterious universe.
are love and hatred the curves of psychic clouds? .
grin of the green never ruffles along cornfield
dream goes on galloping unto the goal won
as hope saddles strength by mighty desire
patience wades through crunching mysteries.
creativity blooms only through freedom..
look at an orchid and its color bewitching
florence of fragrance expends into air
as reality wakes us from deep slumber.
curve of mystery is like ' 'perfect creation'.'.the title is attarctive to the readers.the contents are expressing multi topics..this is a real work of an intelligent author..i like this piece..naizz
The experiential epithets like: 'black shadow'', ''mysterious universe''''deep slumber.''are very suggestive.The visual metaphors like: ''snow falls dazzling by brightness'', conceptual metaphors like: ''patience wades through crunching mysteries.'', ''dream goes on galloping unto the goal won''and especially: ''creativity blooms only through freedom''are present in this poem. Love curve crosses chaotic with hatred curve similar to a poem written by Dante, and make this poem to be an exceptional poem.10++
an contemplating thoughts while about to fall in our slumber..watching the clouds listening to the thunder, wondering if it is hate or it is from a tender kiss after the clash of the thunder..wondering if the conflict able to create what once distructed...watching the years and the days and how the beauty of it's flow..what a wonderous universe softly pass, it just walk with no sound but behind it's silence humankind are the cause of it's noisy voice.....10+++++wonderful deep beautiful poem
i loved the different colors u used to paint this picture...great imagery and nice usage of words
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
rain and thunder, may restrain the light as black shadow curtains glaze and glow all when freaks of wonder by mysterious universe. are love and hatred the curves of psychic clouds? for some reason i love this part. so creately put together.
Thought provoking piece, very nice flow of words..........10
Amazing write! deep thoughts given well worked with nature way to go doc.! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 6:34:12 AM # 1.0.0
A thought provoking write, where you've used so many parables and symbols. In the world of poetry everything is allowed, no need to worry much about the trivialities, the reader is often forgiving, just enjoying the essence, the nectre of your beautiful thoughts. Regards