Cuz I Believe Poem by tanvi damle

Cuz I Believe

Rating: 3.2


I won't let go, I won't leave,
I'll hold on cuz i believe.
When i'm faced by a stormy and cold night,
a candle of faith in my heart i'll light.
And i will be strong even when it all goes wrong,
i'll hold on to my blessings cuz i know they'll be enough to get me along.
I'l catch every firefly and every glow worm,
cuz they'll help the night into a day turn.
I'll hold on to my every single wish and dream,
and find a way to make them come true, no matter how hard it might seem.
I'll catch a falling star, put it in my pocket and carry it along the way,
cuz then incase the sun forgets to shine, i'll still have this twinkling light to help me make it through the day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shadow Girl 21 March 2012

I like it a lot...i might suggest you switch the word cuz to because or as...would flow better with the rest of the text...but great job...kind of like a classic with the word cuz thrown in......if u know what i mean..some beautiful imagery,

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 21 March 2012

good one Tanvi...very motivating.. last two lines should have been made more rhyming.. keep it up..! !

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Hank Moody 21 March 2012

Or you could carry a torch, 'cuz' falling stars are tricky things to catch.

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Vassilis Comporozos 01 April 2012

I really liked this one! A poem, a song to be set to music, and wonderful denotations and connotations, too

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Pranab K Chakraborty 29 March 2012

Poet has enlisted some commitments which she wants to maintain by herself. Nice. Try to follow this manifesto at least to your own life. Thank you for invitation.

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Leah Ayliffe 28 October 2012

Lovely poem full of dreams, hope & magic!

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Your poetic talent has rightly been revealed here and the power of imagination sans any hypocrisy is obviously good to feel..

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Jake Young 19 April 2012

its a really good poem. im glad you showed it to me. one of the best i've seen on here.

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Parithi Muthurasan 12 April 2012

When i'm faced by a stormy and cold night, a candle of faith in my heart i'll light...........very thoughtful line

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Vassilis Comporozos 01 April 2012

Me, again! I'll try to read more poems of yours at night, since I have to do some other things now that my two kids are sleeping.

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