Cuz I Believe Poem by tanvi damle

Cuz I Believe

Rating: 3.2


I won't let go, I won't leave,
I'll hold on cuz i believe.
When i'm faced by a stormy and cold night,
a candle of faith in my heart i'll light.
And i will be strong even when it all goes wrong,
i'll hold on to my blessings cuz i know they'll be enough to get me along.
I'l catch every firefly and every glow worm,
cuz they'll help the night into a day turn.
I'll hold on to my every single wish and dream,
and find a way to make them come true, no matter how hard it might seem.
I'll catch a falling star, put it in my pocket and carry it along the way,
cuz then incase the sun forgets to shine, i'll still have this twinkling light to help me make it through the day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shadow Girl 21 March 2012

I like it a lot...i might suggest you switch the word cuz to because or as...would flow better with the rest of the text...but great job...kind of like a classic with the word cuz thrown in......if u know what i mean..some beautiful imagery,

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Unwritten Soul 21 March 2012

Well i understand, you can do anything no matter what options Hank Moody offers to you you also can do more than that because...cus u believe it...Good! believe it and never give up_Unwritten Soul

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Famida Basheer 21 March 2012

nice... but what's a 'songle' wish? Did you mean 'single'? You have talent.

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Eric Cockrell 21 March 2012

great attitude! ... you will go far!

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Aman Sa 21 March 2012

Good poem, given your age you have potential is what i can say without a single thought. The lines however seem to have a vague connection to a hillary duff song, , keep writing and be creative :)

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Leah Ayliffe 28 October 2012

Lovely poem full of dreams, hope & magic!

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Your poetic talent has rightly been revealed here and the power of imagination sans any hypocrisy is obviously good to feel..

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Jake Young 19 April 2012

its a really good poem. im glad you showed it to me. one of the best i've seen on here.

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Parithi Muthurasan 12 April 2012

When i'm faced by a stormy and cold night, a candle of faith in my heart i'll light...........very thoughtful line

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Vassilis Comporozos 01 April 2012

Me, again! I'll try to read more poems of yours at night, since I have to do some other things now that my two kids are sleeping.

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