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I like your poem very much. Your jaunty tone is just pitch-perfect: it pulls us into the poem by its charming rhythms, and before we realize it we are learning things about the man which make us share your admiration. But (this is is really important in a praise-poem!) you don't push us into admiring him, you don't overstate your emotional connection, you don't get sentimental and make us feel, Gosh, do we have to like him? No, you lead us through anecdotes to see him through your eyes and we willingly follow you, because your language is persuasive. What this really means is that you are telling the truth about your father and I feel your sincerity in every line. Your father deserves not only your praise but your honesty. And this praise and honesty make me think fondly of my own beloved father. This is a shining example of a Poem for the Day! ! !

Congratulations... this poem is valuable and enjoyable both.. But how is its form Rhyme Royal? ..... I think anyone will help me including the very poet.

Wonderful tribute to father Justine.Congratulations on being member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Hi Justine Congratulations on being selected poet of the day. Very beautiful poem on love- Love of a daughter for her father. Just reminded me of the love of my daughter.... While studying in standard VI (may be eleven years old) , asked about her best friend, she answered her School Principal, My Father. She continues toi make me proud and happy! ! ! So, Thank you Justine. A 100++++ And All the best to you Dear! !

Out of harm's way! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Genuine feelings from the heart of heart of a loving daughter. Wonderfully worded. An excellent tribute to a loving father. Thanks for sharing. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X

A wonderful tribute to greatness of dad from a loving daughter. Dads are truly quintessential. Congratulations for such wonderfully worded poem of sweetest emotions.

A Master Piece of Love for Father! ! thank you Poet! ! 10+++!

A Summary of True Dad perfectly portrayed in loving lines and with eloquent feelings! How can One discard the meanings in whole? Wonderful Poem for the respect of a Dad! ! 10!

Poem.shows the love of a daughter towards her father..Beautiful

a poets true feelings for a wonderful dad written with as much love as they have? ...........well penned.

Great write! The poet succeeded in showing that fathers are quintessential.

Congratulations. The soft touch of love expressed in your poem is everlasting.

To a future that's bright..... congrats on being chosen.... a big 10+++++++++

Seems a nice love of dad. Thanks

Great tribute to a loving father for everything he means and does for the welfare of his child. Behind every great child is a truly amazing Father. He had crossed bridges none dared to go. Trounced tons of battles life had to throw.

smile be reborn, wonderful one.