Vikram G. Aarella


Daffodils, The - Poem by Vikram G. Aarella

They are seen just for a month or two
But what a wonderful job they do,

They change the mood and atmosphere
As they start springing up everywhere,

Heralding, the end of gloomy wet days
Bringing with it the hope of sunrays,

As the days pass you see, them more and more
Emerging from the hiding in the earths core,

With joy and happiness your heart fills
When you see the splendid daffodils,

They grow fast competing with each other,
As if to attract the first bee of summer.

Slowly they start changing colour to red,
It’s not long before they are all dead.

Thank the daffodil and shed a tear
To see them again you have to wait another year.



(C) Copyright V.G.Aarella
Rdnr 14/5/06


Comments about Daffodils, The by Vikram G. Aarella

  • Raj Arumugam (7/29/2009 4:06:00 AM)


    a beautiful celebration of nature with charming couplets (Report) Reply

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  • (6/28/2008 7:39:00 AM)


    a beautiful poem, reminding one of Wordsworth's poem.10 for this.flowers are such a blessing.
    mamta
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  • (4/15/2008 1:10:00 PM)


    Yes this poem deserves more recognition - technical elements with a very precise descriptive style. Immediatly I found myself thinking this can bare comparison with wordworths effort. well done (Report) Reply

  • Vidyadhar Durgekar (3/9/2008 6:22:00 AM)


    good reminds me of WW.keep writing........thumba chennagide (Report) Reply

  • (2/14/2008 10:23:00 AM)


    What a lovely poem-- I loved to go through it---- I could actually see the flowers in bloom, youve painted a thorough picture.Very well versed, thanks

    saroj
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  • (2/2/2008 10:09:00 AM)


    beautiful poem...i enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2007 9:10:00 PM)


    daffodils are amongst nature's best creations........so is ur poem best among the ones written on daffodils.......enjoyed it
    wishes
    anjali
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  • (10/20/2007 12:04:00 PM)


    I really liked your poem. Good job, :) (Report) Reply

  • (7/7/2006 6:54:00 AM)


    Wonderful poem...better than mine...lol...well done and keep up the great work (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2006 4:55:00 AM)


    What a beautiful poem. Superb. (Report) Reply

  • (5/20/2006 7:55:00 AM)


    U have captured the beauty of daffodils with a splendid sweep.kudos to u. (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2006 3:45:00 AM)


    now lets not cry over dead flowers,
    what great rhyming skills you have
    my favorite line(s) were
    'With joy and happiness your heart fills
    When you see the splendid daffodils, '
    very magical!
    (Report) Reply

  • Ernestine Northover (5/14/2006 4:09:00 PM)


    True, and they are a delight to see in the cold winter mornings, struggling to break through the earth and glorify it. Lovely poem Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 30, 2009


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