Dance Poem by Anusha Subramanian

Dance

Rating: 4.6


Everybody over here,
Are wearing their pants,
Moving their hands,
To the beats of the band.

Everybody turned around,
Folding their hands,
Jumping over cans,
And they gained their fans.

Everybody moved their legs,
Stretching their pants,
As per their plans,
And they won the audience’s glance.

Then, one by one came forward,
Taking their chance,
To show how they dance,
To the chief guests sitting in the stands.

At the end, they were rewarded with,
Applause from the stands,
Greetings from their fans,
In this country called France.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 26 September 2009

you have danced to the beat in your mind, and this poem did unwind. very good write a ten

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Lily Jeanne Spear 20 September 2009

this was a great poem, real detailed. i loved it!

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Indira Renganathan 17 July 2009

Dance is alright...France is surprising....nice....10

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Bijoy Philip 28 June 2009

A dance would be amongst my favourite themes. Good one

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Kesav Easwaran 12 June 2009

rhythm alright...was good there...but the last line really left me pleasingly surprised...intelligent poem writing...thanks Anusha...10

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Mandara Pookal 21 November 2009

I like the way your mind runs as it walks in tango with your heart and soul in this beautiful composition, regards, mandara

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Marcella D 18 October 2009

danceing helps you feel free and imagen the impossible no matter who are dancing

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Juniper March 07 October 2009

I really like this, very clear and enjoyable

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Salu Salu 29 September 2009

Anusha, you did the dance well with its full rhythm and pleasants... while it concludes with the fantastic rhyme FRANCE, it gets its full spirit. thanks for sharing/salu

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Jen Capaldi 26 September 2009

a nice clean lyrical poem. nice job piecing it together and ending with a bit of a twist. great job. keep on writing dear. Jen

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