Dance Poem by Anusha Subramanian
Dance
Everybody over here,
Are wearing their pants,
Moving their hands,
To the beats of the band.
Everybody turned around,
Folding their hands,
Jumping over cans,
And they gained their fans.
Everybody moved their legs,
Stretching their pants,
As per their plans,
And they won the audience’s glance.
Then, one by one came forward,
Taking their chance,
To show how they dance,
To the chief guests sitting in the stands.
At the end, they were rewarded with,
Applause from the stands,
Greetings from their fans,
In this country called France.
very nice poem, most of the others are also well done and give me the same feel.
Poem sends a message of modern culture. As for grammer, I'm not the one to ask about that. To me word flow, feelings and meaning are the thing of poetry. But, keep writing
nice and clean. keep the grammer simple for all to understand. your grammer is just fine sweetie. keep writing ok
I like the way your mind runs as it walks in tango with your heart and soul in this beautiful composition, regards, mandara
danceing helps you feel free and imagen the impossible no matter who are dancing
Anusha, you did the dance well with its full rhythm and pleasants... while it concludes with the fantastic rhyme FRANCE, it gets its full spirit. thanks for sharing/salu
a nice clean lyrical poem. nice job piecing it together and ending with a bit of a twist. great job. keep on writing dear. Jen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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hey anusha...seems you like experimenting with rhyme...nd its a great attempt too...as far as da grammar goes...wel i juz hv 1 thing to say, dat ur poem runs in both past and present tense at da same time! ! while poetry is only about experimenting with language, sometimes different tenses can create quite a rigamarolle in the readers mind...on a lighter note, i think u have a very vivid thought process which is rely good to see!