I Miss You Poem by Anusha Subramanian

I Miss You

Rating: 4.8

Dear Sister,

I remember your name,
I remember your face,
I remember your style,
And your different taste.

I remember our fights,
I remember our laughs,
I remember our arguments, for the silly little tops.

I remember the times we spent together,
I remember the times we avoided each other,
I remember the times we slept under the moon,
counting the stars like funny little fools.

I remember the days you kissed me,
I remember the days you slapped me,
But then I thought your decision was right,
to move to a hostel, for both of us to spend peaceful nights.

But my nightmare started right there,
When I waved you a goodbye,
With no one to fight and no one to laugh,
I shed tears longing for you to come back.

I remember each moment I spent alone,
I remember the terrible situations I couldn’t handle,
I remember each time that I longed to see a shooting star,
to wish for you to come back.

I remember each time that I hesitated to tell you,
I remember each time when I longed for you to read my mind,
Now, that I feel it’s ‘now or never’,
Here comes the truth that I always wanted to tell you,
‘I terribly miss you! ! ’

Rafique Farooqi 09 October 2009

Well composed and a beautiful poem.........10++++++++

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***chocolate ***candy*** 10 October 2009

love it really glad to been invited to read

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Ananthakumar S 16 October 2009

Dear Anusha! Great Deal of work! Nice rhyming flair that you've got! Please be kind enough to read & comment on my poem about my best friend... http: //www.poemhunter.com/members/mpoems/default.asp? show=poem&poem=19800311 Also, I'll be glad to have a nice poetic friend/ friendly poet! regards, AnanthaKumar Subramony

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Jenna Kaminski 16 October 2009

This is very good :) Reminds me of my brother quite a bit. I like your style -jenna kaminski.

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Shamik Kumar Bose 17 October 2009

Anusha - It is a good display of controlled emotion to your sister.

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Surya . 18 March 2015

vow Great! what a touching write. congrats surya.

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i really like this poem...many people feel like you and i know how hard that is...not to the exact extreme but it brought up my own feelings of longing to have that one person back...

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Aijaz Asif 15 November 2009

true so true, it really is very heart warming fill with longing, I pray for your sister to come back soon....thanks for sharing and keep writing 10+ rgds asif

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Johannes Yeboah 20 October 2009

heart warming, Anusha! ! ! ...this poem is heart warming! ! ....great piece u have here and i pray she comes back.......congratulations from me and its a 10 from me! !

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jaynae carmel 20 October 2009

i really like this peom.......this poem reminds me of me and my older brother, he moved out of the house a year ago but now i miss him, he's like my best friend....... i really love this poem your talented.

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