Dance Of The Trees Poem by Practicing Poetess

Dance Of The Trees

Rating: 5.0


Trees swaying, sashaying in the breeze
Bending, bowing
Onlookers wow-ing

Trees scooping, swishing in the wind
Dancing, dipping
Nearly skipping!

So graceful, although they have no feet
Promenading,
Never fading.

Perfect timing, they never miss a beat
Gently blowing,
Ever growing.



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Saturday, August 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dancing,nature,personification,trees
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poem written June 21,2019
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 August 2019

A wonderful and delightful poem...10++++

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Practicing Poetess 25 August 2019

Thanks so much, Bernard! :)

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 August 2019

Trees swaying, sashaying in the breeze Bending, bowing Onlookers wow-ing//////// wow yeah wow- ing// excellent poem shared

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Thank you, Mahtab! It is like the audience, the onlookers, are applauding the dance of the trees.

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Louis Rams 24 August 2019

dancing in the wind with the summer breeze putting my mind completely at ease

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

{{{{{LOUIS! }}}}}! ! ! ! ! Always a delight to hear from you! Yes, I'm back in the saddle again, after an absence where real life's demands took me away from writing poetry for awhile (I moved: a major undertaking.) Still learning my way and orienting myself to my new environs, but a poet can never stop writing for long. Poems seem to find their way to the surface of your mind at the most unexpected times! Love your rhyming comment! :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2019

Nature in motion! ! Dance of the trees. 🤗 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Thank you for reading and enjoying, Edward Kofi! :)

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Sandra Feldman 24 August 2019

" Ever growing, " without malice or deceit.

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

I smiled at your comment, Sandra. Haven't met a malicious tree yet! (Well, the apple-throwing meanies in the classic film " The Wizard of Oz" had malice, but we must remember that they'd been charmed by a witch!) :)

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