Dancing With The Daffodils Poem by Valerie Dohren

Dancing With The Daffodils

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I’m dancing with the Daffodils
In Spring-time’s warm embrace -
With golden hearts and coronets
They’re swaying with such grace

Together waltzing in the sun
A wonderful display
Upon a ballroom trimmed with green
On this, a lovely day

Such beauty thus besets my heart
And fills me with delight -
I’m dancing with the Daffodils
Of yellow, gold and white

Their perfume drifting soft and sweet
Across the verdant land -
I long to pluck them from the earth
To hold them in my hand

I wonder if they see me here
Amidst their glowing throng -
I’m dancing with the Daffodils
And singing all day long

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 20 February 2014

A beautiful poem that sounds like a beautiful place to be.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 February 2014

Beautiful poem. These daffodils compete with those of Wordsworth.

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Joseph Anderson 21 February 2014

Val- this is a very uplifting, inspiring and high spirited poem and you wrote it before you had to much to drink. i hope you can smell the roses again. Go easy on mixing drinks

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Hans Vr 22 February 2014

I agree so much with Joseph. Very nice and uplifting poem.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 24 February 2014

Dance away Val. Or should that be Mrs Wordsworth? This has a lovely lilt of optimism. Spring must be just around the corner. Hugznstuff

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Bishakha alam 08 July 2018

Love it

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Ken E Hall 18 March 2014

What a way to travel dancing with daffodils nice to know you are a singer too...thats what I call living, you present happiness so well...luvli...regards

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Amitava Sur 12 March 2014

A lovely poem Valerie ''' it pulled me way back to my childhood, running abundantly in the meadows and playing with the butterflies. I’m dancing with the Daffodils And singing all day long ..... very nice feeling.

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John Brown 04 March 2014

Lovely poem Val. We have some tete a tete daffs in our garden, and they are beautiful, I think I'll go dance with them now.

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Valsa George 27 February 2014

This lovely poem reminds me of Wordsworth's golden Daffodiles swaying in the breeze! 'Waltzing in the sun/ Upon a ball room trimmed with green....'. Beatuiful lines!

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