How do you fall
Sometimes, it's like
Going up a ladder
And falling down
And getting hurt,
You don't recover,
Hadn't, you heard?
So true x Thank you for sharing.
Yes, the wound will always have that scar that reminds us of the love lost, giving us sadness from time to time. Beautiful poem
A poignant poem of love that most of us could relate to.Liked the opening and closure lines. They remind us once again the void we always feel of falling down.
It is true. The wound remains for ever giving you pain. Nice one.
Hmmmm! Interesting definition of love, maybe, sometimes… nice one, Sandra.5*
4 stars for a well-worded warning. : )
COMMENT THREE: I'm still with wife # 4, and it's the longest, by far, marriage I've had so far. I DIDN'T SAY IT'S THE BEST. She thinks she's the boss, and I don't get ice cream! ! : (( bri
COMMENT TWO: ....I've felt 'love' for several women and married four of them, one at a time (that's as brave as I get) . After three divorces, I'm glad my skin is 'tough'! ! ! ! Ha ha. (cont.) ...
COMMENT ONE: Well, it might teach her/him a lesson: 'falling in love' is for risk-takers, and best avoided by thin-skinned (easily-hurt) persons. I'm not sure I've ever 'fallen in love', but....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Nice use of phrase 'Fall in Love' with a different meaning. I liked it. Full******