David Harris

Gold Star - 4,611 Points (18 June 1945 / Bradfield, England)

Day After The Night Before (Fun Poem) - Poem by David Harris

Woke up this morning
My hair a shocking pink
Tried to do my shirt up
With a rusty cuff link
My head is pounding
Like a big bass drum
While I laid there wondering
Where I had come from

I had been to a party
Just the night before
Now I was wondering
How I got out the door
All I can remember
Was the pounding beat
The shining lights rhythmitizing
With the dancing feet


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Comments about Day After The Night Before (Fun Poem) by David Harris

  • (5/9/2007 8:54:00 PM)

    That was a really hillarious poem. I gave it a ten. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/20/2007 1:03:00 PM)

    why is it we have those dumb hang overs and yet we still do it again and again. i do not drink they way i use to only one or two beers now and then. but this was a very fine write David. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/30/2007 5:07:00 AM)

    This poem well and truly tickled my funny bone David. It reminds me of my morning mis-hap poem which is also funny.Cheers (Report)Reply

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  • (3/13/2007 4:31:00 PM)

    Great to see a light-hearted approach to a poem, so often we write seriously, a breath of fresh air, Thankyou for shaing it
    Love duncan X
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  • Melvina Germain (3/4/2007 9:30:00 AM)

    Then I would say you had a heck of a time, wish I was there LOLOL. A nice fun-loving poem, loved it David. A big (10) from me.--Melvina-- (Report)Reply

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  • (3/1/2007 2:17:00 PM)

    As one who is unable to hold her drink I can emphasise with this poem, well observed David love Lynda xx (Report)Reply

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  • (2/28/2007 1:55:00 PM)

    Funny little piece. I just read your Bio...very impressive! !
    From a Canadian friend!
    Hugs,
    Dee
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  • (2/28/2007 12:15:00 AM)

    Hold on... is this not completely normal? :) Fun poem indeed D, and well-penned at that. t x (Report)Reply

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  • (2/27/2007 5:35:00 PM)

    Never again we cry... why do we always lie... like it david 9 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 27, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, January 24, 2011


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