Day After The Night Before (Fun Poem) Poem by David Harris

Day After The Night Before (Fun Poem)

Rating: 4.3


Woke up this morning
My hair a shocking pink
Tried to do my shirt up
With a rusty cuff link
My head is pounding
Like a big bass drum
While I laid there wondering
Where I had come from

I had been to a party
Just the night before
Now I was wondering
How I got out the door
All I can remember
Was the pounding beat
The shining lights rhythmitizing
With the dancing feet


(date written unknown)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 February 2007

Never again we cry... why do we always lie... like it david 9

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Hold on... is this not completely normal? :) Fun poem indeed D, and well-penned at that. t x

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Dee Daffodil 28 February 2007

Funny little piece. I just read your Bio...very impressive! ! From a Canadian friend! Hugs, Dee

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Lynda Robson 01 March 2007

As one who is unable to hold her drink I can emphasise with this poem, well observed David love Lynda xx

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Risha : Ahmed 09 May 2007

That was a really hillarious poem. I gave it a ten.

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Jim Foulk 20 April 2007

why is it we have those dumb hang overs and yet we still do it again and again. i do not drink they way i use to only one or two beers now and then. but this was a very fine write David.

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Lisa Wilkinson 30 March 2007

This poem well and truly tickled my funny bone David. It reminds me of my morning mis-hap poem which is also funny.Cheers

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Duncan Wyllie 13 March 2007

Great to see a light-hearted approach to a poem, so often we write seriously, a breath of fresh air, Thankyou for shaing it Love duncan X

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Melvina Germain 04 March 2007

Then I would say you had a heck of a time, wish I was there LOLOL. A nice fun-loving poem, loved it David. A big (10) from me.--Melvina--

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