Death Poem by merna ibrahim

Death

Rating: 4.8


Death is the most difficult truth to face
because it really leaves a trace
It breaks the heart forever
you can't forget it 'NEVER'
but life go on by force
it runs like the horse
But we must survive,
and don't give up to sorrow of life.

Our hearts must be full with faith
So the surrender will be erased without leaving a trace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You did well in dealing with a difficult subject. Keep writing.

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Omar Ibrahim 28 January 2009

i dont like talking about death because it is the most shocking fact.but well done merna keep it up omar ibrahim(cairo-EGYPT)

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Muhammad Ali 04 April 2009

Very nice poem friend when we learn how to smile on worries........ there life wins 10

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Zeinab Sherif 16 June 2009

i love this poem, it's words came straight from your heart u said what's inside our heart&mind.

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Zeinab Sherif 16 June 2009

i love this poem, it's words came straight from your heart u said what's inside our heart&mind.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 20 November 2010

Excellent poem expressing the philosophy of death very effectively. The poem is rich both in imagery and depth. Elegant write

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Nimal Dunuhinga 25 August 2010

Your death philosophy is readable And if somebody could erase the name Give a substitute, As we're fed up of that unvarnished name?

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The Lost.. 22 January 2010

i think u mean dying alive...right? ? ? anyways very nice one...well done :)

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 November 2009

'Our hearts must be full with faith So the surrender will be erased without leaving a trace.' That's good write. Very meaningful and expressive poem Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Doha Ewiess 18 November 2009

this is actually so meaningfull....and expressive...nice rhyming...well done :)

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