Pain, is my life
Optimist, is my sight
Evil, is my breath
Missory, is my hope
Heart, is my strength
Useless, is my worth
Nothingness, is my soul
Torn, is my thought
Elusive, is my spirit
Remorse, is my love
well written... very interesting idea to express your thoughts using acrostic style...but is it really acrostic?
POEMHUNTER! ha I like the Idea it's very good makes me wonder....
good poem, but no one should feel that way. anyone who does doesnt try to be happy. life is what u make it.
good poem, i like all the words you used to show emotion.. good write, millie.
the piece is so nice...and although it is not long at all and has no complications and hard expressions....but it is so expressive and this is great about it....nice piece steve :)
Evil, is my breath this is a really cool line. my sis showed me this poem cause its one that she really likes of yours and she is right yet again... this is really good.good job. White Slash
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi, artist! Impressive words used there. Written in a unique and fantastic way! Keep on writing! (Typing)