Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 65,655 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Death Be Mine! ... [inspired By Patti Masterman's ' I Die In Bits And Pieces ' On Ph; Death My Way; Personal] - Poem by Bri Edwards

I say let me not die without agility!
Give me pills or a knife while I've ability..
to administer the blessed coup de grace.

A pile of compost can be my resting place!

Topic(s) of this poem: death


Poet's Notes about The Poem

you can see it there. death on my own terms. drowning or hanging might do in a pinch! i'm thinking of building a guillotine. anybody have blueprints?

:) bri

Comments about Death Be Mine! ... [inspired By Patti Masterman's ' I Die In Bits And Pieces ' On Ph; Death My Way; Personal] by Bri Edwards

  • Eugene Levich (11/20/2015 4:40:00 PM)


    Pills or a knife? Heaven forfend!
    Too much ice cream will be your end.
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  • (11/19/2015 8:02:00 PM)


    your epitaph:
    Here lies Bri
    Composting in this place.
    Died with agility.
    A knife in his hand
    Dealt the coup de grace...
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  • Alice Perfect (11/19/2015 7:34:00 PM)


    off with your head
    i doubt blue will dribble
    sleeping in late?
    and no time to scribble

    can I drop the blade for you?
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 19, 2015



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