Death Of A Moon - Part 2 Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Death Of A Moon - Part 2
Moon, with all the courage and determination
took this blow with the courage shown
to the outside world
created a deep hole inside
And that started reflecting on the moon
As it started to grow and shrink
Many thought that the Moon will never
win the hearts again
and soon will be the forgotten story
For few days, Moon remained subdued
And after one cycle
Everybody realized that it was the Moon
That made the night - bright and delights
They plea to the Moon but Moon said no….
His Friend Sea became calm and quite
And when Moon appeared
Everyone celebrated except owl
the celebration of the sea was extraordinary......
I was eagerly waiting for the continuation... and now I understand why the sea reacts to the phases of the moon. Let the sea rise and fall to the gimmicks of moon. Just loved this imaginative thought.10 plussss
The moon is responsible for the sea's tides and the romantic's tides as well
this one is making the series more interesting now i can't wait to read next.
This part is even more intriguing and the series seems interesting now.
We have so many heros available to us to write about. You've chosen an unlikely one for your series and so far you've absolutely nailed it. This is one of the more intriguing pieces I've read. Personification of astrological bodies had been done before in mythology but never quite like this. You've got me hooked, I'm off to read part 3
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 9:57:58 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow the way you move the lines just purely sentimental, i love the passion and the darker tone you set here, it a bit dark (in a good way) , beautiful thought and yet so natural..loved it