Deceitful Love Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Deceitful Love

Rating: 5.0


His love is like
The silvery dew that
Clings on soft petals
Of lovely flowers
So fleeting as the air
That touches
A beautiful face.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin,All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 08 August 2020

Excellent writing and such a perfectly presented and beautifully imagined poem by a world-class poetess who always knows how to write such a unique standalone poem. A world-class poetess by the name of Rose Marie Juan Austin. And I thank you Rose Marie and a most well deserved 10 full score and it should be much more for poetry woven fine gold.

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Soran M. H 08 August 2020

Many poets wrote about love, but yours is so fresh and flourish in terms of creating new feeling and expressions; we can call it the original.. you are so good, congratulations 10++ and it goes onto my fav list

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Soran M. H 08 August 2020

So fleeting as the air That touches A beautiful face.

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Soran M. H 08 August 2020

A very bland poem, short and meaningful, your style is very desirable, I suggest if you can print your works in a book like Ruby Core, I think many readers will be interested in your style

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Sandra Feldman 08 August 2020

The tenderness of this poem is blessed with deep sentiment but one can feel the quiet steal, of fleeting, love. Impeccably done!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2020

Opposite side of true love has been candidly expressed here in this wonderful poem! Beautifully put....5 stars.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 August 2020

Love and art! ! ! Muse of someone at hand. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Yes, dear poetess, deceitful love is lika a drop of dew that clings to a beautiful flower. The dew will disappear soon the sun rises....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 August 2020

Ah what a lovely expression! On to My Poems List

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 August 2020

A wonderfully composed piece, having the qualities of a lovely poem. Truly exceptional....10++❤️❤️❤️

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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