His love is like
The silvery dew that
Clings on soft petals
Of lovely flowers
So fleeting as the air
That touches
A beautiful face.
Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin,All Rights Reserved
Many poets wrote about love, but yours is so fresh and flourish in terms of creating new feeling and expressions; we can call it the original.. you are so good, congratulations 10++ and it goes onto my fav list
A very bland poem, short and meaningful, your style is very desirable, I suggest if you can print your works in a book like Ruby Core, I think many readers will be interested in your style
The tenderness of this poem is blessed with deep sentiment but one can feel the quiet steal, of fleeting, love. Impeccably done!
Opposite side of true love has been candidly expressed here in this wonderful poem! Beautifully put....5 stars.
Love and art! ! ! Muse of someone at hand. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, dear poetess, deceitful love is lika a drop of dew that clings to a beautiful flower. The dew will disappear soon the sun rises....10
A wonderfully composed piece, having the qualities of a lovely poem. Truly exceptional....10++❤️❤️❤️
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent writing and such a perfectly presented and beautifully imagined poem by a world-class poetess who always knows how to write such a unique standalone poem. A world-class poetess by the name of Rose Marie Juan Austin. And I thank you Rose Marie and a most well deserved 10 full score and it should be much more for poetry woven fine gold.