Deep Addiction Poem by Sandra Feldman

Deep Addiction

Rating: 5.0


I try to get away!
Say,
I'll come back another,
Day,
Not today,
But as Planets attract
I am completely linked,
Addicted,
To your
Mysterious poetic Act
That I can't explain,
Only feel
In this, our secret,
Lifelong Pact.

Sunday, November 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 18 November 2018

Love it! .. Ever so beautifully moving! .. And so beautifully poetic too! .. Beautifully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 November 2018

A Planet O' super gravitational power it has dragging me, dragging he/she dragging us with super magnetic fragrance into its endless path, immortal lap Yes- I come, he/she comes they come to it smiling, its wisdom, its philosophy its ideal morality its sense of humor its everything its life Yes- This is POEM /// great

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Ramotlhaba Chrisjan 12 November 2018

Nice poem. Nailed it with great thinking

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2018

Yes, poetry has its mysterious poetic act for which we can never leave our passion (which we call addiction) . Beautifully penned...10

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