Deep In My Heart Poem by Antonio Liao

Deep In My Heart

Rating: 5.0


as the waves conquer, the ocean floor, and the water kisses
the river stream, the joy that lingers in my twinkling heart, makes
my whispering soul, to rejoice in your soul

you who lived with me amidst of a miserable world, wins my heart,
to go where it takes, live where it ends and conquer where i stand,
waves all the struggle that echo in a distance land, for my dream,
would never be the same

leave me not, for my life will lives only with you, believe what i see
not in every wilderness you find light, not even memories to
remember that life we live is but a dream to forget, just hold on
in my shadow for i will make you live

iam not a god nor you a little god, where every angels live, yet! the
wisdom of time, reveals the essence of life, that holding me is to live
with you, its a space between space that will make you survive to
where your life live

time as time past bye, every moment lift is our to share, it is a
parting good bye, that in darkness of the sky, the firefly illuminate
the infinite shadow of what meant to love you, leaving the pangs
of death

my heart believes the pristine breath that you give, a heart that
creates something that only you can give, a revealing you, where
everything comes into being, an incense of eternity begins

hold me close, and i will take you there, to the yell of hearts, to the
dream of reality, a joy that last forever, to the afterlife where we
begin and always trust my heart that beneath the wings, we will
pass the dawning rays of joy..... thank you and i love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Phan 02 February 2009

i love it n remind of guy n i give u 10+ well done

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C T Heart 11 November 2008

Every stanza showed what your heart is, so meaningful and romantic...great imagery used in this poetic theme...i loved the whole frame. a 10/10.

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Kesav Easwaran 10 November 2008

...'life we live is but a dream to forget, just hold on in my shadow for i will make you live'... well meaning lines...make up the soul of this good motivating poem...10

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Viola Grey 09 November 2008

I like the final stanza in this piece...great work

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Mimzy Sue 03 November 2008

wow! ! very very interesting poem. Liked these lines alot 'leave me not, for my life will lives only with you, believe what i see not in every wilderness you find light, not even memories to remember that life we live is but a dream to forget, just hold on in my shadow for i will make you live', it'll be in favorite list mimzy

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