Time is a manifestation of the
Human Mind
Once man FINALLY established
that the Sun was actually static
and the Earth went around
then one circle
became equal to 24 hours
‘'Sunrise to sunrise''
All else is conveyed in the
Modern Zodiac
Hence everything happens in
Phases and natural
Time periods
With slight variations
Interdependence on
ENVIRONMENT
CIRCUMSTANCES
and
HEREDITY/ (GENETIC FACTORS)
Time thus becomes the
True and Valid God
But only we don't appreciate
what will really happen
when that Time comes
that's why
Time becomes alone
and is
‘'TIME IS CLASSIFIED as an UNIVERSAL GOD''
Creation of the human mind
We all are just born
to live a life of our own choosing
then when that TIME comes
We just simply Die
and even don't seem to know
to say
Good Bye
When!
As Time becomes an inescapable
inevitable God
it also encompasses
Environment
But a superficial god is needed
for controlling the masses and mobs, sensibly
So don't hurt any or doubt their individual faith
keep on fighting for your nation
We alone are its future
everlasting creatures as creators,
generation after generation
since ages passed and ages hence
This is another of your beautiful creation that really teaches to love time and respect it. Your poetic note is also reflecting on your poem and why you choose anonymity. This is really very good and beautiful. None of us have control over time but we all should flow with time.
You asked me to read a poem of yours called Time but you have several with Time in their titles. I am experiebcing eye problems so I cannot read too long nor comment like OI like to so if this isn't the poem you requested me to read I will need better directions. This poem is something obviously close to your heart!
THANKS SUSAN YOU HIT THE NAIL RIGHT ON ITS HEAD YOUR EYES ARE OKAY YOU MAY NOW READ MY POEM DONATE YOUR EYES LOL
We alone are its future everlasting creatures as creators..the philosophers now and in ancient times taught....... there is not time THERE IS ONLY ETERNITY: : Thank u very much for your poem and your thinking of time...... time as God is a doubtful subject for me.... but i respect your thoughts as a poet. thank u. tony
good and a very frank comment thanks GOD IS JUST A CREATION OF OUR HUMAN MIND MY VIEWS YOU ARE entitled to yours thanks doc tony
That is a great philosophical ink. The concept about time, the style of writing and the flow of lines make the poem very interesting. Thanks for sharing.10+++++
I was looking forwards for the signs from poets like you Thanks you liked it after I have more comments shall lead to greater moments of scientific PHILOSOPHY- - as you say may be. but more into possibility time just shows repeated attempts modernised by medicine meditation and so on as individual concepts vary Thanks AKP SIR
A fantastic verse, Poet. I particularly admire how the poem, the words merely trail away, disappear, suggest that things cease to exist. I suppose in so many ways, - that is life. Among your finest, Poet!
AS Canadiens can we take forward like ISKON USA our newer message We are scientific but spiritualists have their own verdict each one for himself we all do and must respect But POETS CHANGE THE WORLD at least in its THINKING FROM TIME TO TIME YOU MAY SMS ME
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A brave and 'timely' poem. Many individual truths and feelings but with an accentuated and serious universal feeling for nation and peoples and Time. Not a run of the mill work, rather one that runs feelings and deep philosophical thoughts thru the mill., Time, religion, human and social behavior are greatly depicted Quite an interesting work, even extraordinary for today., I must say!