Definition Of Time Poem by me poet yeps poet

Definition Of Time

Rating: 5.0


Time is a manifestation of the
Human Mind

Once man FINALLY established
that the Sun was actually static
and the Earth went around
then one circle
became equal to 24 hours
‘'Sunrise to sunrise''

All else is conveyed in the
Modern Zodiac

Hence everything happens in
Phases and natural
Time periods
With slight variations
Interdependence on
ENVIRONMENT
CIRCUMSTANCES
and
HEREDITY/ (GENETIC FACTORS)

Time thus becomes the
True and Valid God

But only we don't appreciate
what will really happen
when that Time comes
that's why
Time becomes alone
and is

‘'TIME IS CLASSIFIED as an UNIVERSAL GOD''
Creation of the human mind

We all are just born
to live a life of our own choosing
then when that TIME comes
We just simply Die
and even don't seem to know
to say

Good Bye

When!
As Time becomes an inescapable
inevitable God
it also encompasses
Environment

But a superficial god is needed
for controlling the masses and mobs, sensibly

So don't hurt any or doubt their individual faith
keep on fighting for your nation

We alone are its future
everlasting creatures as creators,
generation after generation
since ages passed and ages hence

Wednesday, October 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,death,heaven,medical,poetic expression,time,timeless
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
My god is TIME...I have experienced so many things happen in phases in man's life, changing seasons and so on
But one mustbe permitted to have one's own faith
as per one's mind and belief....
Do not over impress anyone.
We all have individual brains
we all are
each one is an entity.
Any doubts and challenges
are welcome
But I don't want...nor expect anyone to believe in me.
I am also an individual as you all are
But NOT DESTINED TO GLORY
AS my Time says
since ages passed and ages since
and thus ages hence
that is TIME'S GREATEST GIFT FOR ME
HENCE MY ANONYMITY
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 17 October 2018

A brave and 'timely' poem. Many individual truths and feelings but with an accentuated and serious universal feeling for nation and peoples and Time. Not a run of the mill work, rather one that runs feelings and deep philosophical thoughts thru the mill., Time, religion, human and social behavior are greatly depicted Quite an interesting work, even extraordinary for today., I must say!

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Varsha M 18 November 2020

This is another of your beautiful creation that really teaches to love time and respect it. Your poetic note is also reflecting on your poem and why you choose anonymity. This is really very good and beautiful. None of us have control over time but we all should flow with time.

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Susan Williams 27 October 2018

You asked me to read a poem of yours called Time but you have several with Time in their titles. I am experiebcing eye problems so I cannot read too long nor comment like OI like to so if this isn't the poem you requested me to read I will need better directions. This poem is something obviously close to your heart!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 October 2018

THANKS SUSAN YOU HIT THE NAIL RIGHT ON ITS HEAD YOUR EYES ARE OKAY YOU MAY NOW READ MY POEM DONATE YOUR EYES LOL

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 October 2018

We alone are its future everlasting creatures as creators..the philosophers now and in ancient times taught....... there is not time THERE IS ONLY ETERNITY: : Thank u very much for your poem and your thinking of time...... time as God is a doubtful subject for me.... but i respect your thoughts as a poet. thank u. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 October 2018

good and a very frank comment thanks GOD IS JUST A CREATION OF OUR HUMAN MIND MY VIEWS YOU ARE entitled to yours thanks doc tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 October 2018

That is a great philosophical ink. The concept about time, the style of writing and the flow of lines make the poem very interesting. Thanks for sharing.10+++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 October 2018

I was looking forwards for the signs from poets like you Thanks you liked it after I have more comments shall lead to greater moments of scientific PHILOSOPHY- - as you say may be. but more into possibility time just shows repeated attempts modernised by medicine meditation and so on as individual concepts vary Thanks AKP SIR

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Mj Lemon 19 October 2018

A fantastic verse, Poet. I particularly admire how the poem, the words merely trail away, disappear, suggest that things cease to exist. I suppose in so many ways, - that is life. Among your finest, Poet!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 October 2018

AS Canadiens can we take forward like ISKON USA our newer message We are scientific but spiritualists have their own verdict each one for himself we all do and must respect But POETS CHANGE THE WORLD at least in its THINKING FROM TIME TO TIME YOU MAY SMS ME

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