Deft Fingers Poem by Sandra Fowler

Deft Fingers

Rating: 5.0


Deft fingers sketch the ever falling sun,
Paint good-bye on the lens of imagery.
West fades across a field of goldenrod.
Amber is warm elegiac to the touch.

Shadows become a landscapes final gift.
You tell me so with your eloquent eyes.
One need not speak to be articulate.
I hear what you could never say aloud.

Above our heads, sky is autumn enhanced.
I think it is a masterpiece in gray.
You wrap your arms around me like a coat.
And so we stand immersed in light's ebb tide.

Copyright,2008, Sandra Fowler

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 12 September 2008

'I hear what you could never say aloud'- Great! That is the poet!

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, aryaindia 08 September 2008

Captured well within the warmth of your splendid words are the ebb and tide of dwelling anew to a freshness of another day. Your work is splendid indeed.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 September 2008

A vivid imagery, , , , , , , , , , , , my 10

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Koyel Mitra 07 September 2008

Excellent poem with lovely imagery.A full 10.

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James B. Earley 04 September 2008

A delightful hint of eroticism...and the evening is yet so young! Excellent.

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Sonya Florentino 18 August 2009

with you Sandra, landscapes speak... and what music....!

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Mamta Agarwal 12 January 2009

Sunset, lenghtening shadows, colours of Autumn, the aura pregnant with warmth of a loved one- lovely poem and such vivid imagery. thanks Sandra, for such a beautiful poem. Warm Regards Mamta

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Andrew Blakemore 06 January 2009

Such warmth within this tender write Sandra, just beautiful. Best wishes, Andrew

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Luis Gil 23 December 2008

Your visual perception, shades and colours are translated into words that express what cannot be articulated. Poetry aims at going beyond words using words. The reader as a silent lover who can understand and heal his own wounds. The miracle of art. Merry Christmas, Sandra.

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James Foulk 24 November 2008

a very warm and tender piece of work. thank you for reading love faded away and for your comment

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