~ DELIGHT UNALLOYED ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
26 July 26,2010
Come alive
In Pure Delight
O’ You.
Douse
Dive deep into
Ocean of ambrosia.
Watch Oh
The Light
Nascent
Supreme
Emerging from
The setting sky
Of bosom
Oh You.
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Adapted from RNT [for detail info please read Bliss ~ niv]
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an invitation to life to dive into divine sea of light this is divine ambrosia this world needs to drink on a sea of love compassion all should embrace be drunk on
Aha...excellent..bejesus swayed by wordings..Watch Oh....splendid Poet has nicely adapted from RNT... She is maturing in RNT I suppose Though I know it is very difficult to adapt RNT nevertheless her effort is commendable Thanks sharing...Tenner
Much better! This I like...your alliteration here works because you have tied it into your imagery. good one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very romantic and sensuous verse full of contemplation and philosophy too. I liked the variety presented in the verse 'through flowers'.