~ Désespoir! Pourquoi? ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Expressive and imaginative Enjoy reading Congratulations Rgds Nooruddeen

very interesting and lovely.

Majestic…magnificent…magical… baronial… Poet explained her despair and resultant surrender as in confusion her feelings are but ‘Is my mentation a fantasy? ’ Again questions in form of answer ‘Know not but.’ A very well conclusion and bosom-candy poem… 10++

The words 'Desespoir Pourquai' sound abracadabra to me.

Excellent poem with good diction. Well expressed. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

I am a simple lay man. Your poems are like climbing everest for me. I have to drown more and more to explore you, I mean your poems.

Wow, fantastic use of vocabulary (honestly I have a very good volcabulary but, a few words I had to look up) and to get it all to work with rythem and flow. It was a great read and made me think about it after for quite awhile. Beautifully written :)

I find no time … stay in-tune With my tune cadence love is the harmony of the spheres, without harmony of universal love consideration, a song of beauty is lost, a world of beauty is lost, souls and love is lost

It took me some time to understand but it was time well spent. Once I understood, I really thought the poem was ecstatic. A fantastic feeling communicated in an extremely nice poetic way. Let it be real!

very good vocabulary, if a little out of reach for MY mind... keep writing! :)