First page on Poemhunter? !
Made it on the first page
of poemhunter,
is it a blind luck
or way deeper
a serendipity thing?
The day before
have done a rare thing
tried to ease my heart
soul and mind to build a harmony
of me with my surroundings.
Could such way of being
attract or make things
happen?
Who knows?
Would I care?
Would you care?
How would it matter?
First page on Poemhunter?
Should I fall into
Illusion or delusion
of grandeur? !
Lol.
First page on Poem hunter..Wow. How much excited you would have been!
Very beautifully penned your anxiety.Proceed with confidence.
by the void of blue heart feels what it is deeper you see greater you feel when grandeur lays back in between illusion and delusion, thanks dear Elena for sharing, kindly read new of mine
Learn to appreciate others, and it shall come back to you tenfold!
How others perceive us is fine and good, but how we perceive ourselves is subject to humility versus ego. As Valsa said, peoe like your work and that is rewarded and is to be appreciated as an honour. Well done but so good of you to be modest and self deprecating, a strength showing genuine character. Well done with is achievement.
If many others can come on the first page, why not you Elena? It is no delusion or illusion! You are liked by many! Be happy about it! Enjoyed your poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Congratulations! How did you make it? I mean what was the feat? Whatever... it's neither illusion, nor delusion of grandeur but perhaps the reality, recognition of the reality.