Demon And Ghost Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

rhythm greatly maintained in this poem. Very good.

poets who good- amazing shoot. your quote from Kipling and Grisham's law, are reference points. very well crafted. 10 Mamta

good juxtaposition of ideas...the rhythm reaches dramatic moments well-linked to the meaning

a good compsition. stimualting shan

To have appetite is good for health...but gluttony is too bad...will lead to chronic digestive abdominal problems...thanks for your good awareness poem, Ashraf...10

A VERY WELL WRITTEN POEM! 10! -RAJ NANDY

so musical! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

a good write there on the bar game...not neccessary you should have friends even like catrina said...you should just have a crooked mind...and then the crown will promptly sit on your head

...Good one.Rhythm is great....10 - Brishti

Dear poet, Maybe my English isn´t that good to keep up with Kippling´s ideas but one thing though, I´d like to comment on: Souls know no east nor west, love knows no bounderies... Before God´s white throne, our souls won´t come wrapped in our national flags, we won´t appear before Him labbed from the east / from the west He will see us through... Love will be our identity before the Lord, His holy spirit is the label of those of are truly sons of God, Love is the DNA of the sons of God Can anyone tell me if eternity is in the east or in the west?