Desire Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Desire

Rating: 5.0


Let it be unknown what's anonymous!
Is it necessary to proclaim
the color of feelings?

Who wanted to reach over cellular?
Neither the kiss nor the caress
on the deep days
Pushed buttons thousands times?

Who wanted to receive
signals beyond network?
Who was stupid beyond fool?


Poem 09
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

Monday, May 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 May 2008

you write beyond words, you think beyond thought................marvelous ashraful.

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Mamta Agarwal 23 August 2008

amazing poem. i agree with Yusof.

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Tsira Goge 04 September 2008

Ashraful, Very beautiful... It is pleasantly made... 10. Tsira

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Shimon Weinroth 13 September 2008

well done, perhaps minor corrections thousands of times beyond foolishness

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 September 2008

This is what they call the Netizen foolishness! ! ! .......and madness! ! !

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Alex Lewis 25 June 2009

I enjoy pieces on fate. This is one of my favorites. 10

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Desires are fancy n unstoppable. well thought poem....10 i wrote stroing desire... compare for name sake

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Karla Bardanza 19 May 2009

Great lines! Simple & perfect! Love & Light! Karla

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Flose Boursiquot 18 May 2009

i liked how the poem flowed in a complex yet simple way you kinda had like two diff things embodied in one.

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Muhammad Ali 15 May 2009

simple they can be asked... but these are difficult questions! ! ! nothing to do with their answers...! ! yes a very nice work Dear! 10.. Ali

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