I hear
The angels and the wizards
Fighting the devil
and the damned
They speak in whispers
So as not to scare
The human kind
I asked them once
Why could I hear
The things
That they did say
Am I dead
Or am I alive
They said
Your not dead
Your alive
It's in your head
The visions of our lives
It's just
Your past lives
Watching over you
Making sure
The devil
And the damned
Never hurt you
Yeah the angels told you true, dont let the devils hurt you... But if they dare do that to you i will find my strength to punch them to protect you...but you should protect yourself Mr.Superman hahahahaha...Another great poem with strong elements, like the spirit, adore the words, it's amazing write Dave! _Unwritten Soul
Very interesting metaphors. I like the vague word play here, nice touch. Beautiful work, as always.
love the part about past lives... good poem, again crossing the thin barrier between life and death!
10 out of 10 my friend! ! ! Great poem defining a great struggle!
I love the last two stanza's, they really makes this poem. The poem is very good by ti's selve, but the lst two lines make it more than epic
A soulful read. Good luck to you, my dear stranger-friend.
Amazing..though i had to read twice to understand it. So true, we have to fight with our own evil thoughts to bring good in ourselves and others for the benefit of mankind. Great write. Please do read my poems 'Never love in life' & 'I love you' and write your comments.
Poe wrote somewhere about the denizens that 'laugh but do not smile.' This reminds me of Poe, and that is no put-down. Good stuff; great for halloween.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow this is very insightful i love it keep writing! (: