Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 465,361 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Diamonds Are Forever - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Diamonds are for ever and to be retained as treasure
So are the friends whose love can’t be measured
Both occupy a unique position and play a vital role
We keep them at heart and feel very near to our soul

Diamonds never loose their value so the friends
So much belonging and safety in the life till the end
Today is the day to realize the pulse of real feeling
Where you are never to let me down willing or unwilling

Why I lay stress on my female friends so close to the chest?
They from all over the places stretching form east to west
What a lovely feeling mixed with sorrow, love and hate?
I might have realized it not in life early but very late

Why female friends give more humanly touch?
Do they care more and show the path with torch?
May be they are gifted with all cares and devotion
I go all out for them without any reservation or question

Thousands have stood by me in my creative work to go on
Never cared for their feelings and came off to their own
What a beautiful feeling and respect and never to disown?
Create a position and belief never to be shaken of its own

What do the sun, stars and sky suggest to for its purpose?
Why have we to take everything with calculated move and suppose
It has its own stand to be aligned with the emotions and feelings
Nothing comes all of sudden but with pure internal feelings

What do I see in them in this particular day?
Is the only mean to realize the goal in a way?
Expressing the desire in the possible way with sweet words/
Look with hopes and never to fall back without inching forwards

I saw in you my guardian, savior, lover and companion
This day may ignite special spark in eyes for closer union
Stars may loose their tails or fall to dash the ground
I may see the great hope and enough hope to be found

I may not survive to witness it still further
I am sure you may take it still deeper and deeper
What is left behind in life after missing so much?
It is closeness and fondness at heart as such

Days may come and go after certain duration
Nothing will be remembered or left for its elevation
I think not about fall out but opposite to negation
Believe in it and concurre it for affirmation

You come each day in life and spread the light
Show me the direction in which to go left or right
I have only love and affection to offer but not the fight
To be in near vicinity and not loosing hope or sight

Comments about Diamonds Are Forever by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (7/14/2010 10:28:00 PM)

    Diamonds are for ever and to be retained as treasure
    So are the friends whose love can’t be measured.. it is real treasure...10
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  • Unwritten Soul (2/27/2010 10:07:00 PM)

    This really leave me so speechless... the beautiful crafted word is amazing... i think u are the great poet..i can feel it and oh..it really leave me to think more...amazing (Report) Reply

  • (2/27/2010 8:58:00 PM)

    nice poem. nice rhyming. very optimistic. style wise, its nice and well crafted, i agree with the rest, you used the almost perfect metaphor. but perhaps, my style is totally different from yours, as i would use an irony at the end, perhaps something like
    death will seperate us but in thy heart i would linger.
    goodbye my lover, my diamond like friend
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  • (2/21/2010 2:09:00 AM)

    'I have only love and affection to offer but not the fight
    To be in near vicinity and not loosing hope or sight '
    Indeed you've all [Love Affection Hopefulness] are the propelling force
    Very sholarly crafted and eucatitive as usual I imbibe
    Thanks for forwarding my feelings
    Ms Nivedita
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  • (2/17/2010 9:36:00 PM)

    wow...this can be a best letter to friend....a promise that freindship will never end...the value of friendship is priceless and is never changing....

    i was so pleased you invited me to read this brightest piece....

    and another one...diamond cant be created..its natural and so is friendship...
    i should have told my friends that they are diamonds....

    thanks for this....
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  • John Knight (2/17/2010 2:57:00 PM)

    Hi Hasmukh - Theis is a megapoem with very good rhytm and rhyme. I has good flow. V 1 Diamonds are a condensed form of carbon and are valuable because of their rarity - hardness - durability and lustre. It is magic jewel that has dazzled Kings - Knights - Knaves throughout human history. V 2 Diamonds represent wealth and stability and they are the greatest symbol of love between a man and a woman. V 3 Ladies are like diamonds - priceless and multifaceted. V 4 They glow with an inner light. V 5 Jewellry crafted with daimonds is always beautiful and alwys fashionable. V 6 Each diamomnd - like each lady - have an intrinsic beauty nothing can mar. V 7 Diamond is the hardest substance known to man. The moral is: Never mess witha woman! V 8 Never underestimate a woman - like a diamomnd her value increases day by day. An older woman brings experience to all circumastances! V 9 The depth of fire - in a diamond - is unfathamable. Likewise the depth of love and devotion is infinite compared with man's shallowness. V 10 Men forget and eliminate but (V 11) Ladies remember everything - know everything - can do everything - like diamonds their love and devotion is forever. God created Adam first - he looked at the product - rechecked and revised His blueprint and created woman - PERFECTION. Thanks for sharing - Yours in Poetry - JOHN. (Report) Reply

  • (2/13/2010 8:41:00 PM)

    I hope you survive to continue to write. Your poem is beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (2/13/2010 6:26:00 AM)

    (What a lovely feeling mixed with sorrow, love and hate) ...contradiction between love and hate makes my mind think a lot and try to mix them in one feeling.that's interesting....the poem is full of wonderful words which made me think about every verse alone.i read it two times to figure it out.great poem.
    thanks for sharing
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  • Dulakshi Wakista (2/13/2010 12:40:00 AM)

    You've created a wonderful poem.I like the stanza 'Thousand have stood by me in my creative work to go on'.i really loved i.It has so valuable meaning. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 12, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, February 15, 2010

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