Different State Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Different State

Rating: 5.0


Darkest nights alter to colored lights, .
Bodies yet lose the weight,
reaching a strange state
when you find your soulmate, and one thought
two minds celebrate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Celebration of love. Loved it.

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Khairul Ahsan 17 November 2020

'two minds celebrate' - a lovely thought so beautifull expressed in this short poem!

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Antonio Liao 25 September 2013

a collage of soul collide within the state of free will, the mind stop where the heart begins to laugh for Joy....

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 September 2013

Wow real fine poem so lovely to read. Pls coment my latest too on NATURE.

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Unwritten Soul 09 December 2012

Great write, short words but worthy ones_Soul

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