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Rating: 4.3

In a gathering
When I feel
Deafs are talking
Though..
Thoughts are whips
Words fall dead
On my lips

Friday, March 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: disappointment
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Valsa George 14 March 2017

This is a natural response....! We wish others to listen to us, if not words will freeze on our tongue! You have said so much in simple and minimum words! Excellent!

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 April 2017

A peaceful discussion is a real peace. Thanks

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Clarence Prince 09 April 2017

Thoughts are whips, words fall dead! That's true!

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Susan Williams 04 April 2017

This is an incredible piece of work- - I keep coming back to read it. Extraordinary writing, dear friend! 10++++++++++++++++++ [I don't know if they will permit me to vote on its rating again but I shall try! I can be vert trying... ;)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 March 2017

A poem with intensive thought having diction in brief.Well done. Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 15 March 2017

Words fall dead On my lips - - - - - - - - - -they might as well when no one listens. Discussion is becoming a deceased art form.

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