Distance Poem by Shahzia Batool

Distance

Rating: 3.8


My mind
with all the precious
treasures of memories
travels a lot...
but the distance
of its journey
is from
myself to yourself...

Tuesday, January 10, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 02 June 2012

Yes! You have touched many peoples minds and emotions with your insightful, beautiful, easy to understand, yet deeply moving words.

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Shihabudheen K J 16 May 2012

great indeed..........so short but so promising lines.........the meaning of distance is so big..........

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Ramesh Rai 26 April 2012

Indeed a long journey but very closer

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Wahab Abdul 23 March 2012

an excellent piece! heat to heart is the distance the journey took along with memories of the journey itself.

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Rizvana Parveen 20 March 2012

lovely lines...........

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Passionate Reader 02 July 2013

Great compression! ! ! wise, true and insightful! ! ! :)

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Heather Wilkins 13 June 2013

short and to the point. I like short poems. I love the thought of this poem. The distance is short between you and me.

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Farah Ilyas 12 May 2013

wao brief but amazing poem, to write a brief poem to show some one's worth inspiration ally, wholly & completely is really hard task to do, but when it comes from a brillient poetess like you, there is no need to surprise

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Sun Shine 08 May 2013

A simple yet complete poem.

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Yasmin Khan 30 April 2013

It's nostalgic, brief and brisk, with a beautifully built paradox.

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