My mind
with all the precious
treasures of memories
travels a lot...
but the distance
of its journey
is from
myself to yourself...
I feel true 'break-down' of language to describe how simply you summed up an overwhelming phenomenon of our lives.
Brisk but very nice poem! Go to member club/member area then inbox to read yor mails. And tel me if u still cant see them. God bless.
My mind with all the precious treasures of imagination travels a lot... but the distance of its journey is from being to unbeing...
short and to the point. I like short poems. I love the thought of this poem. The distance is short between you and me.
wao brief but amazing poem, to write a brief poem to show some one's worth inspiration ally, wholly & completely is really hard task to do, but when it comes from a brillient poetess like you, there is no need to surprise
It's nostalgic, brief and brisk, with a beautifully built paradox.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes! You have touched many peoples minds and emotions with your insightful, beautiful, easy to understand, yet deeply moving words.