Distorted Love Poem by Ashley Ormon

Distorted Love

Rating: 5.0


How distorted is the meaning of love
Of men and woman today?
In all believing that sex is love
And can be easily thrown away.
Hookups and breakups,
One-night stands,
Where is the pure love,
Between woman and man?
It’s all about “playing the game”,
And where’s the love in that?
I tell you this “new love” of theirs,
Is so dull and flat-
Distorted love I call it,
Lacking the true affection that’s kind,
Maybe true love has been forgotten,
And someone needs to remind,
That this “new love”, “distorted love”
Needs to be left behind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
, aryaindia 10 October 2008

You echo sentiments of what runs in the minds of many regarding this word and depth called 'love'. Excellent in your depreciation and accord, keep writing. arya

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Marianna Jo Arolin 10 October 2008

Your words speak the truth. I liked this one very much.

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Harish K. Thakur 11 October 2008

Orman, u r right.Love is something that speaks from heart n not from gut. The carnal appetite can't replace it. your statement is straight n right from ur heart.Wel done. Carry on...

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Ency Bearis 12 October 2008

a write to open eyes to the trend nowadays...great write.. Ency Bearis

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Manonton Dalan 13 October 2008

so beautiful and i know alittle bit of what really love is, now i have better idea. thanks.md 10 for you,10 for your poem,10 for your readers.

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Dev P S 30 June 2012

the meaning of distorted word is explained in truth and in poetical beauty

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Keith Hendrickson 06 January 2009

i loved this. realy like the way you flowed. keep up the good work

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*Trusting You* 07 November 2008

Maybe true love has been forgotten, And someone needs to remind, That this “new love”, “distorted love” Needs to be left behind. these words ring true for so many of us. good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 October 2008

A nice poem with love. Love it with my 10.

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Brandon Park 18 October 2008

That was a really nice poem. I feel the same way about what people call 'love' these days. Keep these poems coming.

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