If You Want... Poem by Ashley Ormon

If You Want...

Rating: 5.0


If you want me let me know,
Don't play with my heart my dear,
Sending different messages,
Allowing me to laugh and tear.

If it is I you do not want,
Don't play with my heart as if you do,
Don't allow me to get hopes all high,
And begin to start loving on you.

If you want me only to use me,
A warning sign would be nice,
Remember both the good and bad,
Always pay a price.

But if it is my heart you truly want
Just tell me it my dear,
So I won't be wandering to and fro,
While you are standing here.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 06 February 2009

A wonderful piece. hammering.10 you may read any of my poem at random. I hope Cleopatra's glory and Helen of Troy will be educative. others are mostly four lined.

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Louis Rams 06 February 2009

ashley! i must say' with your heart i will not play' if you promise that you will stay.this poem has gone all the way. another ten you could go to my page and read to your hearts desire.

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Thomas Coltrin 10 February 2009

thx for ur comment.....i like this one alot....the way u write its cool...i like it lol

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Kesav Easwaran 07 February 2009

'But if it is my heart you truly want Just tell me it my dear, So I won't be wandering to and fro, While you are standing here'... beautiful concluding lines, Ashley...you tell it straight but in a nice way...soft and humorous tone...nice rhyming too...good piece...10

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Amy Ludidi 07 February 2009

i must give props for 2 things especially, the sarcasm...a warning sign would be nice..and the rhyme scheme, very well penned u got game word

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Emily Sleator *His Babey* 07 February 2009

awwwwww so true check out some of my poems! ! ! ! !

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Vernon Eaker 07 February 2009

Excellent simply excellent moving and heartfelt, well written wonderful flow of words. an easy 10 from me. keep writing.

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