Maia Padua

Rookie - 292 Points (Virgo / City of Gentle People)

Do Stay With Me - Poem by Maia Padua

While mirthful breeze travels
To the unknown
Heavenly rays slowly glow
Soothing a soul, a soulful bliss
A touch, a young morning’s kiss

As I dream on a breaking dawn
Of a new day
Don’t go far without drifting me
Stay with me, until morning comes
Cradle me in Your loving arms

Like breeze as gently as it goes
Without goodbye
My dreams drifted me afar
In Your loving bosom, I will stay
As teardrops' dream shed away

In meadow’s soul I found my home
And in mellow sundown show
With its breeze blowing gently
Until twilight years, you stay with me

You stay with me
In twilight and mornings’ way

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Do Stay With Me by Maia Padua

  • (12/3/2016 6:32:00 AM)


    Tender emotions, gentle and warm...a wonderfully written poem! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/1/2016 6:17:00 PM)


    Elegant and ethereal, its very classical in its language and soothing to read. Congrats for poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Pamela Sinicrope (12/1/2016 4:56:00 PM)

    Do stay with me
    Romantic and lovely. Congrats on poem of the day! :) (Report) Reply

  • Christina Simmons (12/1/2016 12:59:00 PM)

    Stay With Me:
    What a beautiful romantic poem so full with fantasy. We all know nothing last forever but this poem make it seems otherwise. I feel quite hopeful after reading your joyous words: - makes me all dreamy couple with nice thoughts and it being chosen for special poem. (Report) Reply

  • Seamus O' Brian (12/1/2016 9:09:00 AM)


    From the city of gentle people comes a gentle and beautiful poem. You have captured with your words that sway like the breeze an eternal sentiment of the human soul, to be loved faithfully and enduringly. This is a delightful piece of poetry, and one that deserves to be read time and again. For that reason, it is chosen well as the poem of the day.

    Bravo, fine poet!
    (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (12/1/2016 8:56:00 AM)


    You stay with me,
    Until twilight years, you stay with me!
    Lovely! ! !
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2016 8:56:00 AM)

    Do Stay With Me
    Beautiful poem..Thank you for sharing and congratulations.. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (12/1/2016 6:48:00 AM)

    in twilight and morning way
    good write, I like it, thank. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/1/2016 4:25:00 AM)

    Love and life
    I've found my home! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (12/1/2016 4:22:00 AM)


    Longing for the togetherness of love....beautiful...congratulations on the poet of the day- 10 (Report) Reply

  • Partha Pratim Goswami (12/1/2016 3:42:00 AM)


    Mind dances with aspiration of light...a morning kiss...a soulful bliss...every word I utter reciting this poem takes me somewhere unknown...great work...thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (12/1/2016 2:31:00 AM)


    Nice poem.... Congrats on being selected for the day.... (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2016 1:41:00 AM)


    A marvelous presentation of tender feelings of love. Congrats on the member poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (12/1/2016 1:31:00 AM)


    n meadow’s soul I found my home
    And in mellow sundown show
    With its breeze blowing gently
    Until twilight years, you stay with me

    You stay with me
    In twilight and mornings’ way- - - - A wonderful love poem inspired by nature, Thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being Poet of the Day.
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  • Muzahidul Reza (12/1/2016 1:03:00 AM)


    While mirthful breeze travels
    To the unknown
    Heavenly rays slowly glow
    Soothing a soul, a soulful bliss
    A touch, a young morning’s kiss

    nicely written, thanks for sharing this poem with us
    (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (12/1/2016 12:21:00 AM)

    Do Stay With Me
    Very nice poem. Congratulations for having it selected as member poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/30/2016 7:51:00 PM)


    so nice.. i loved n liked..10

    Improvise chain

    Will you come again?
    To relieve my pain
    And improvise chain
    I shall happy with change
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (6/16/2015 5:03:00 AM)


    What a beautiful write! ! Loved it.Keep inking. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, June 15, 2015


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