To my beloved and her lost grave
Uncanny
Emerald eyes of her over to save
Me, nothing more to be say
When she wept the cry of silence
Forgive me for all I was
Forgive me for all I shall not
Watt
Before the rut
Uncanny
Voices of all strings
Shattered in tornado
Tornado of blood
Blood of loss
Uncanny
No words
Words words words
I felt like the ghost of laura
admirable, fascinating one.with wonderful flowing of prosees and verses. i enjoyed its bitter style. thankenstein~nb
admirable, fascinating one.with wonderful flowing of prosees and verses. i enjoyed its bitter style. thankenstein~nb
Hi, Impressive, Well done, Very very touching. Forgive me for all I was Forgive me for all I shall not I dont know why but It reminds me one of those poem that I read while passing university courses, Its name is C.L.M By John Masefield. Hope to read more of you: p: p: p
So deep like always, but what a sad thing is you always make me sad...Wish there's some poem of yours make me smile again...Write more Amir, dont forget you hold talents that people rarely have...Keep on :) _Unwritten Soul
I just have to echo what the others said.. this poem has a good flow.. and is a bit interesting.. thank you for sharing this..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this poem has a good flow and was interesting