Dream Girl! ! ! Poem by Compton Wright

Dream Girl! ! !

Rating: 4.6


My dream girl is a beautiful angel
From way high in the heavens I saw how they
Created her just for me how she was putting her
Body, her mind and her spirit as they all was godly
They put her wings upon her back and her halo on her head
And off she went to the earth down below
As she glides her way down where
The birds would sing their melodies,
The flowers would bloom from her presence,
And how Mother Nature opens her heart with pure welcome
She was heavenly; she was a queen’s gift of wisdom
A goddess gift of beauty to me to be blessed
As I saw from the garden of life
Near by the fountain of youth
A tear comes out my eye as I felt peace inside my heart,
I felt a missing piece of my soul is fulfilled,
I felt like she restores my faith to thee so I thank her for that
I want to have her in my arms yet I can’t at all
I stuck between pure fantasy and the fabric of reality
Her heart is what brought me to her
As it was a glow that even the universes
Would search and achieve her as their queen
She might not know this is how I feel and see her
As a true goddess but hopefully she would understand
That whatever everyone says about her appearance
She can say that “in this man’s eyes I am his goddess
And can’t nobody can change that the feelings I have for him too
Because I am his fulfilled dream come true as his lovely…dream girl”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Whoa baby, BEAUTIFUL write! ! .....It was worth it! ! <33 Payyton

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 09 December 2008

Dang, awesome job! If she read this, I thnk she'd be hooked! Scale 1-10......13!

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Hannah Weeks 10 December 2008

Well worded, very good. Keep writing.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 11 December 2008

that is absolutely beautiful nice work

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Lycko Chizo 29 July 2009

Whoa... An0ther 10+ such a good descripti0n of ur dream girl, i have my dream girl too read my poem 'Late Love' to find 0ut

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SUMMERCHICK UNKNOWN 17 February 2009

I like this poem.im your dreamgirl.jk lol! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! keep up the nice work.

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Stephanie Saba 29 December 2008

awe this is adorable! ! ! love it.: ]

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** ** 13 December 2008

I want to have her in my arms yet I can’t at all.. i like it very much: p

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LaTisha Parkinson 12 December 2008

:) this is really sweet

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