poet Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

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Dream Girl

Keep her in your dreams,
with appealing streams,
with her cuts and curls,
with her diamonds and pearls,
with a day in her cheeks,
with a night in her peaks,
with roses in the lips,
her necks are the slips,
ahead are the hills,
a valley of thrills,
just dream and adore,
don't travel any more,
your dreams may be shaken,
your heart may be broken,
she will loose her charms,
keep closed your arms,
she is nice in dreams,
not in real streams,
keep her at a distance,
just feel her fragrance,
for inspiration and art,
keep her in your heart.

(An advice to my FB friend Noel Rai)

Topic(s) of this poem: girl

Poem Submitted: Monday, October 19, 2015
Poem Edited: Monday, October 19, 2015

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  • Khalida Bano Ali (9/19/2019 7:38:00 AM)

    Keep her in your dreams, Keep her in your dreams, keep her in your heart.
    A nice love story.

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  • Bisma Mirza (11/9/2015 3:13:00 AM)

    Very Nice onE! ! 10 on 10..................

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  • Saheb MohapatraSaheb Mohapatra (10/24/2015 5:19:00 AM)

    great piece of poetry with all the ingredients to make it soothing and sweet..............loved reading it.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/23/2015 6:37:00 AM)

    Thrilling expression. A beautiful love poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. - - 10

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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (10/21/2015 12:03:00 AM)

    Wow... such a sweet rhyming poem! Great advice to people blind in love!

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (10/20/2015 3:35:00 AM)

    Please make a girl for me with you enlightened mind and creative imaginations.......loved it.

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  • Musawir Raakh (10/19/2015 7:26:00 PM)

    Great work of rhymes, cool 1

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  • Kelly KurtKelly Kurt (10/19/2015 12:13:00 PM)

    Many things seem desirable until you have them

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (10/19/2015 9:31:00 AM)

    Superb rhyming, lovely imagery and great advice!

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  • Khalid Saifullah (10/19/2015 8:39:00 AM)

    A nice advice......................................

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  • Loke Kok Yee (10/19/2015 7:52:00 AM)

    Good advice to all young lovers.
    Thanks

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