Drowsy Illusion Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Drowsy Illusion



[Dedicated to my friend poet Aijaz Asif]

Drowsy illusion
Infatuation
Like love

Word-word game
Architect of dream
Anomalous

Roaming heart
Tired burn-out
Pain ruins

Fled away
From unkind life
Drowsy illusion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 21 June 2009

There is no running away from delusion until and unless we recognize that it exists, nicely penned!

0 0 Reply

Powerful imageries from a deep imagination.10.

0 0 Reply
Rakesh Bedi 21 June 2009

Fled away.....; from one illusion to another! But my friend, truth is hidden somewhere between illusions n delusions! ! !

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 21 June 2009

WOW! ! ! another master piece and fine dedication to a great poet too....lovely theme about life........10/10

0 0 Reply

a beautiful poem, gently penned

0 0 Reply
Reshma Ramesh 22 June 2009

great words well crafted with a subtle message..........

0 0 Reply
Wojja Fink 22 June 2009

more sober than a judge, wise poem, great title says it all.....John

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 22 June 2009

Excellent imagery. I agree with Amaryllis. A very unique dedication. Kind regards, Sandra.

0 0 Reply
Yelena M. 21 June 2009

A unique dedication..Simply yet very powerfully expressed..Thanks for sharing! Best wishes. A.

0 0 Reply
Brishti Mazumdar 21 June 2009

Drowsy illusion Infatuation Like love ....................... Fled away From unkind life Drowsy illusion . ...liked your expression.Wonderful thought process...10+ - Brishti

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success