Drugs And The Cheats Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Drugs And The Cheats

Rating: 4.5


I put my head
In these hands
of despair as I see
The drugs and the cheats

What kind of man
Wants to see that
on the streets

They take over the town
Selling their brown
Whats it going to take
For someone to bring them down

Maybe it's time
They took their own brown
Then lets see
If they can stand their ground

One way or another
They are leaving this town

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 25 October 2011

The corrupt of the world. I cannot find it in me to blame them, this is an ugly world. Beautiful poetry.

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Rachel Butler 25 October 2011

'Whats it going to take For someone to bring them down' RAB

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Kaleena Riddell 24 October 2011

This is good, and a good example on how drugs and drugs dealers are affecting our life more and more these days.

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Lady Keva 24 October 2011

Great poem I love it. Its acreality check 4 drug dealers and cheaters...... oh and Im glad u liked my poem

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K .w 24 October 2011

This poem is so true. People shouldn't make money that way it's called being lazy. They should get real jobs!

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Geetha Jayakumar 16 September 2013

Poem with a Great message.. Loved the way you portrayed it.

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Anthany Rohloff 25 August 2012

Great read! ! Thanks for the suggestion! ! I'll be reading more of your poems! ! Keep up the great work!

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Bethany Buhl 04 November 2011

I hate to say this but I highly doubt people are gonna take that big of a stand against drug dealers.

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Sonali Sings 30 October 2011

Again another poem taking into account another big evil prevailing in the social order that is drug trafficking. And the remedy lies in, 'Maybe it's time They took their own brown Then lets see If they can stand their ground One way or another They are leaving this town ' Great write.

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Richard McClellan 29 October 2011

Love this line here Dave! ! ! 'Whats it going to take For someone to bring them down' Great Peom!

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