As dusk seeps into the chamber of my heart
loneliness starts haunting my senses,
as the memories of betrayal gave
deeply poignant edge to the night.
My heart became it's own prisoner,
and I'am left with an incompleteness within.
© Aarzoo Mehek
At times we feel very low. When dusk descends, our mind grows cloudier! But as the day grows brighter, our mind gets clearer and we get back into a cheerful state! You have powerfully delineated your feelings in this crisp write!
A touching description of inner feelings in a very impressive style, a lovely poem.
Feelings keeps us alive. Thanks for taking out time to read my poem.
loneliness starts haunting my senses, as the memories of betrayal gave deeply poignant edge to the night.. heart as prisoner..... your poems reveal a lot especially the inner struggle. thank you very much for the depth in your poem. tony
I believe poems are the secrets of a trapped soul. it wants to scream and vent out the joys and pain.. It's a mixed bundle of emotions longing to share it with the world. Thanks for understanding the emotions behind these words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Within! Deep in your heart; with the river of true love. Thanks for sharing.