Dusky Moments! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Dusky Moments!

Rating: 4.7


As dusk seeps into the chamber of my heart
loneliness starts haunting my senses,
as the memories of betrayal gave
deeply poignant edge to the night.
My heart became it's own prisoner,
and I'am left with an incompleteness within.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Dusky Moments!
Sunday, December 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: memories,moments
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2016

Within! Deep in your heart; with the river of true love. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 31 December 2015

At times we feel very low. When dusk descends, our mind grows cloudier! But as the day grows brighter, our mind gets clearer and we get back into a cheerful state! You have powerfully delineated your feelings in this crisp write!

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 January 2016

Thanks for such beautiful feedback. I appreciate!

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Akhtar Jawad 27 December 2015

A touching description of inner feelings in a very impressive style, a lovely poem.

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 December 2015

Feelings keeps us alive. Thanks for taking out time to read my poem.

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Seema Chowdhury 27 December 2015

Lovely description, nicely composed.

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 December 2015

Thanks for appreciating.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2015

loneliness starts haunting my senses, as the memories of betrayal gave deeply poignant edge to the night.. heart as prisoner..... your poems reveal a lot especially the inner struggle. thank you very much for the depth in your poem. tony

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 December 2015

I believe poems are the secrets of a trapped soul. it wants to scream and vent out the joys and pain.. It's a mixed bundle of emotions longing to share it with the world. Thanks for understanding the emotions behind these words.

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