Dust Poem by ONElia AVElar
Dust
In the curve of an eyelash, fallen;
in the dust of an empty room -
evidences of someone`s presence...
Why do you insist, you are alone?
It is proved: Most of the skin -
once shed becomes 'house dust'...
Hey, not a house ghost,
Nothing about sixth sense,
Well, call it nonsense, or ninth sense...or dust
Sofia,03.06.2008
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amazing, wow, beautiful with little words you said alot well done 10 from me
your poem... force me to close my eyes... thinking that all comes from the dust....your such a very talented poet... who give what our eyes can see.... perfect.... be with me closing our eyes...10+
Dust is the evidence of someone`s presence... nice logic. Last stanza is mysterious with sixth/ninth sense. As a whole, a small & beautiful poem.10.
I used to hate dust but you managed to give it a whole new perspective. well done!
Hi ONElia, I have read this poem again today and thinking about seventh and 8th sense.
Another beautiful meditation on an everyday thing - you add mystery and atmosphere to all you look at, One. x Jan
Too much of dust and dusty room looks haunted only...no wonder you're afraid of a ghost...nice poem
Why do you insist, you are alone? It is proved: Most of the skin - once shed becomes 'house dust'... Very delicate and fine verses, ONElia. A thin line between seen and unseen.......10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 4:09:47 AM # 1.0.0
Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life and that you have proven by writing such a beautiful poem.....