*dwells In Me Poem by Catrina Heart

until when the fire shall live....lovely deep last three lines...the helplessness we face makes us handless and faceless too...we feel tied and lost...very well expressed

Nice theme... of the widening chasm betwween our dreams and reality. We build our life with bricks of compromise and mortar of sympathy. I wish all your dreams to come true.

What dwells in us makes us strong and what comes out will make us weak.

Catrina in back again! It good to see you are starting off where you left.. good job

very much poignant...something more than mere forgiveness seems to be dwelling in there...10

ntil when the fire shall live? only my own self to extinguish when forgiveness dwells in me... that is how you evaluate the life with different angle. life is same but with variation in feelings..it was never a different.. full of anger, deception. happiness, joy and with all colors.....10

forgiveness dwells in us, and a divine character kind to others and ourselves....nice poem

i read and marvelled at your atitude of repentence. marks 10

Cat, you always write in a touchy way that whenever I read your poem, I feel it's my idea. Have you theft all of my ideas that I became silent like an old tree besides a river?

Extremely deep in sorrow saved by forgiveness exellent work Catrina A strong character employed++++10 regards