Catrina Heart

*dwells In Me - Poem by Catrina Heart

lost am I on a raging sea
drowning in a painful fury
of ruined dreams and collapsing me

eyes are on flames, heart is frozen
as hands was molded in metal sheets
capped with eons of crusade

until when the fire shall live?
only my own self to extinguish
when forgiveness dwells in me

3rd of February,2010

Comments about *dwells In Me by Catrina Heart

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2010 9:23:00 PM)

    ntil when the fire shall live?
    only my own self to extinguish
    when forgiveness dwells in me... that is how you evaluate the life with different angle. life is same but with variation in was never a different.. full of anger, deception. happiness, joy and with all colors.....10
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  • (5/20/2010 9:45:00 PM)

    forgiveness dwells in us, and a divine character kind to others and ourselves....nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (2/24/2010 3:07:00 AM)

    i read and marvelled at your atitude of repentence. marks 10 (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (2/11/2010 1:03:00 PM)

    Cat, you always write in a touchy way that whenever I read your poem, I feel it's my idea.
    Have you theft all of my ideas that I became silent like an old tree besides a river?
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  • (2/10/2010 2:41:00 PM)

    Extremely deep in sorrow saved by forgiveness exellent work Catrina
    A strong character employed++++10
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  • (2/9/2010 6:04:00 AM)

    A powerful write Catrina, you have a way with words, poignant
    Lynda xx
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/6/2010 10:23:00 AM)

    ma'am... i checked out your poetry section and i am surprised because you have new posts... i read it and i think this poem is one of your best. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2010 8:06:00 AM)

    very much poignant...something more than mere forgiveness seems to be dwelling in there...10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 5:02:00 AM)

    Catrina in back again!
    It good to see
    you are starting off
    where you left..
    good job
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  • (2/4/2010 4:05:00 AM)

    What dwells in us makes us strong and what comes out will make us weak. (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2010 8:43:00 PM)

    Nice theme... of the widening chasm betwween our dreams and reality. We build our life with bricks of compromise and mortar of sympathy.
    I wish all your dreams to come true.
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  • (2/3/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    until when the fire shall live....lovely deep last three lines...the helplessness we face makes us handless and faceless too...we feel tied and lost...very well expressed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 3, 2010

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