On one fateful evening
Of our calmly fading lives
Gripped by unknown despair
With tears you proclaimed
That final flickers of light
Will be departed with the dying sun
While I sat timidly anticipating
The flow of eloquent verse
Full of emotional incessancy,
Strangely you falsified my hope
With the script of an epitaph
And surprised my sensibility
If death is your inevitable wish
To escape the afflicting domains
Believe me I will lay bare myself
As yards of benumbed earth
Infuse your concealed tears and
Integrate with your mortal remains! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
hm....... its good dede. really life in earth is like this
realms of deep thinking opened through these profound lines! truth well depicted!
here is a poem which can be read and appreciated over and over again..
This earth along with us is dying out slowly, Seema...for want of kindness compassion love and good will...on account of wounds inflicted by we earthlings... good write, thematic...good use of allegory...10
Hey seema you are a sweet heart amazing.......how do you get ideas....for the poems..i just loved it...
Oh seema! what a poem! ! ! weightful composition! Lovely! ! 10++++
like rk --I too will say the same that your poem is to be read and read and read and read a 100 times A+ and 10+ love anju
the poem of you is good as sugar is sweet. revolutionery spirit in love and passion is shown with poerful words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Death is something that only He could deem...a 10 from me Seema.